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     He left me.
     Left me where I was standing after Cheren and Alder left.
     After the Sages ran away.
     After Team Plasma went missing.
     He left me at the castle window.
     The window that stood open to the world where he flew away on Zekrom's back. How could he? After everything? After everything that has happened? His words rang in my head, the color of his eyes and hair and lips stuck in my mind.
     He left me.
     The words ran loud and banged around in my head, like drums. Each word getting its own note. Reshiram stood behind me, watching the evening sky from the window just like me. He was long gone, nowhere in sight and having no place to go. I stumbled back away from the window and ran into his throne. I slammed my back into the golden throne and slowly slid my back down it until I was sitting on the floor with my back turned away from his throne and our battlefield.
     Something warm slid down the curves of my cheeks. I pressed my hand to it.
     There it was.
     Shining beautifully in my hand.
     A tear.
     It has been a while since I cried. I cried when my father disappeared, cried when my mother didn't let me go begin my journey.
     My heart crumbled.
     I was broken.
     I sobbed against the throne, the salty tears falling like rain drops. They made my vision blur and sparkle. My breathing quickened and my throat constricted.
     I lost N.
     The one man who could make me feel like I lost everything when truly I lost nothing. The one man who could make me act clumsy and make my heart flutter and skip.
    I banged my fist against the throne, crying into it.
     Reshiram glanced at me sadly, he could feel my pain, practically taste it. He bent his head down to comfort me. I threw my arms around his head and cried on him.
     "I love him!" I cried to him. Reshiram cried out gently to me, his eyes watering for my loss, my pain.
     I felt like I was dying, my body was shutting down.
     I slumped against Reshiram's head and he lay down beside me, covering my body with one of his wings. His warmth poured into me as all I felt was cold.
     I wasn't dying bodily.
      I was dying emotionally.
     I clenched my hands into fists and shuddered, the cold traveling up and down my spine.
     I remembered my last memory of him.
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    He jumped onto Zekrom as Zekrom locked eyes with Reshiram. I raced toward N as Zekrom launched out of the castle. The two were floating with the heavy wing beats. I stood on the edge of the open window. Zekrom lowered himself with slower beats of his wings as he attempted for N and me to make eye level. I reached out for him as he reached for the tips of my fingers.
     The tips of our fingers ignited as we touched each other.
     My blue eyes stared into his green eyes, begging.
    Please don't go.
     He read my thoughts I so clearly portrayed on my face.
     "I'm going to make you a promise," he said softly to me as his hair blew in the wind.
     "Don't go," I said to him. He shook his head.
     "I have to, but I promise you this, if I ever come back, I promise to come back as a better person. You see, I have to rethink everything. My ideals, my promises…I even have to rethink you," he said, soft as a whisper.
     "Me?" I asked, confused. Tears were burning my eyes. My world was crashing.
     "Listen to me, I love you. I love you so much. But I don't want to hurt anybody I love," he said. My insides were dying.
     "I rather feel pain than feel loss," I whimpered.
     "Loss is temporary, scars are forever."
     "N, please. Please don't go!"
     "I can't promise I'll come back, but you're my magnet, always pulling me to you every time I'm away," he said sweetly. He looked at me with sad eyes. Zekrom began to pull our fingers tips away as I teetered on the edge of the window.
     The both of them flew off into the setting sky.
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     I huddled against Reshiram, the moon hanging up in sky.
     "Please, don't go," I said a final time.
     
Will be a continued story.
Credit to artist who created Preview picture.
A little snippet afterwards when N left and he left Touko there.
Touko's name will be changed to Blaise in this writing due to originality because I don't want to call her White or Touko.

Second Chapter:
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AriaSnow Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:cries:
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AnimeNoelle Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
TT~TT amazing story i remember playing through this part i literally fell apart when he just left i went around found all the sages did all this stuff hoping he would show up again and my spirit just got crushed till black 2 when he came back and mentions touko in his talk with the new hero
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TheShipingQueen Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
i felt the same way TT~TT
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AnimeNoelle Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
TT.TT so sad!
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TheShipingQueen Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
i know TT~TT
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AnimeNoelle Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NNNNN!!
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TheShipingQueen Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
wat :baffled:  about N
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AnimeNoelle Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nothing i just had to yell it.. like the Khan phenomenon
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TheShipingQueen Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
lol  so how ya been doin......wanna be my friend

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SerenaHarmonia Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Student General Artist
awwwww
:(
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sabrinajuniper999 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This sounds like me at the end of the game. I was actually crying. N flew away and I was laying on my bed sobbing my eyes out. My mom walks in and goes "What's wrong honey?" And I was all like "N left! He just left! He flew away on Zekrom!" And she looked at me like I was stupid. Then when I found out that a black shadow had been spotted over Anville Town I went there hoping to find him. Didnt find him and started crying again. Then he came back in Black and White 2 and I was like "N!!!! I MISSED YOU SO MUCH!" And started crying again. N was my first Pokemon Love. TT^TT
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DaydreamingLatina Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
Same here!!!! Except he is STILL my first love <3
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sabrinajuniper999 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
He is my first love, but I also have other's. Like Gary and Lance. Oh and by the way, did you see the Episodes of pokemon that have N in them? THEY ARE SO GOOD!
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DaydreamingLatina Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
I haven't been able too. My internship keeps me pretty busy from writing and watching TV so I haven't been able to catch up with the show, but when I get a free moment, I'll be sure to put those episodes down first on my to-do list.
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sabrinajuniper999 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Really highschool has been keeping me from writing~
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DaydreamingLatina Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013
Haha same
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eevee134 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
awwwwww
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Pok3monTrain3rBlu3 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Artist
the end of the game was truely sad. TT^TT good story
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DaydreamingLatina Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Thank you! ^.^
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Pablo09 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
can you link to the pic alone?
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FuchiRodgz2012 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's wonderful, I haven't felt so melancholic in a long time.
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DaydreamingLatina Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Thank you!
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StrawberryNinja15 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Student Artist
OHMYGOD. That was...emotional. That was awesome. You had BETTER KEEP UPDATING THIS THANG. e.e
Jk, but seriously, that in itself, was an AWESOME piece of writing, very well done. :D
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HeartlessBlood Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
But he flew away on Reshiram's back... :/
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DaydreamingLatina Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
For me, it was Zekrom's back :/
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CatSharkLover123 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012
...that was so sad...I love it!
I think i'm gonna cry now...
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DaydreamingLatina Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
haha, thanks for loving it!
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g33ksp33k Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011
; ~~~~~~~ ; TWYETW;;;;;

my eyes got VERY watery reading this. i fought it though, "must not cry" i kept repeating. xD


THAT WAS SO SAD. wryy.
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DaydreamingLatina Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011
Thanks for your review!
Sad, haha, for some reason i like writing sad stuff( im not emo/goth)
I just happen to be good at it(not trying to brag)
Thanks for reviewing!
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unovaheroes Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
~crys~ i hated it when he left :{
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DaydreamingLatina Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
i do to! especially in the game!
i finished the game and started crying and my mom goes, "what's wrong sweetie?" and then i go, "N left me!!!!"
and then her face goes like this: -_-
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unovaheroes Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yea!! And it really sucks tht there are no feelings in the game like the character can't do anything about buy it hurts the player emotionally I cried like twice the ending music is so sad and when u see him fly off its depressing cuz u can't go to.
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DaydreamingLatina Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
i know right!
It hurts us players so badly, and i'm really hoping for a grey version so he can come back! the ending music is just beautiful. I would have left with him if i could wahhhhhh!
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unovaheroes Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
-crys- omg ikr dear gosh I think I mighy cry now I mean he's. HOT. _ why couldn't someone else had left.
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DaydreamingLatina Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
he's effing hot
exactly!
maybe someone like..... oh god i dunno.
Ghetsis and the rest of the seven sages were already arrested so who's next?
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unovaheroes Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol ikr and idk not saying touya's not cool but he could have left I mean ima not really a fan girl of n I like him and touko together but god he is hot!!!
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DaydreamingLatina Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
Haha!But Touya wasn't really in the game, he was just a partner for you in the Double Battle trains. God, i hate Touya's hate his americanized name. haha
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AnimeFanCrazy197 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2011  Student Photographer
:squee: I love N and Touko~! FAVEORITE COUPLE!!!
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DaydreamingLatina Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2011
I love them too!!!! I love that couple!
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lexonandaxel Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011
Aww.... :<
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Durralyn Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011  Student Writer
This is so effin sad. I have to dry off my keyboard now. I'm totally gonna keep on reading this, I havn't found anything so moving.
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DaydreamingLatina Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011
You had to dry off your keyboard? LOL! haha, i loved writing this. For some reason, the only pieces i write that are moving are the sad ones soooo yeah. Thanks for commenting! Haha-I like your sig!
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Durralyn Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011  Student Writer
thanx man. wat my sig says is true, well not so much as kick yoir a** as burst your ear drum.
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DaydreamingLatina Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011
lol. I know what you mean. Im really short and i have to go through "You're so short!" and "WHy are you so short?" and "God! Im so much taller than you!" every. single. day.
I effing hate it.
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Durralyn Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011  Student Writer
screw them, we are so not short! everyone else is just freakishly tall.
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DaydreamingLatina Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011
EXACTLY!!! Sometimes i just want to scream in their face and say "SHUT UP! I GET THE POINT! I'M TINY! OK!!!!"
Jeez, it's like they have to repeat that over and over again every. single. day!
lol
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Durralyn Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011  Student Writer
Well actually, I get do scream in their face, but I say "SHUT THE F*** UP, I'M NOT EFFING SHORT!!!!" I think it just makes the problem worse. But then they regret it when I kick their a** in a pokemon battle. NO ONE BEATS MY DRAGONITE!!!
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Aqualung22 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Professional Writer
I started crying while reading this. You've got my respect.

After reading this, I think I'm gonna support Ferris Wheel Shipping. Epic- how you describe her emotions.
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DaydreamingLatina Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011
I've got your respect? YAY!
I cried while writing this.
Please support Ferris Wheel Shipping. It's so beautiful and I love it with all my heart.
It's epic? Thank you!!!! :)
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